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Shaz
Murder Cutlery


Joined: 07 Dec 2007
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Location: Essex

PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 1:03 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

The wind. It blew. Rattling the leaves on the tree, biscuit wrappers flying in the air. Two little children run, arms stretched, their hair rustling against the invisible wind, smiles fixed on their lips as they head to their mother. A man in black mafian-style coat & a hat with a white striped thingy wrapped around it. He looked deeply into the sea, breathing in the salty air. Then, the waves came forward, rushing forwards, shifting the man’s pose as the water rose to his knees. He ran backwards. Simultaneously, the wind blew hard again. But this time, the wind & the wave surged in opposite directions. There was fog in the air. Seconds later, all died down. Back to normal all seemed until a loud voice came from a woman in the beach.
‘Help! Somebody help! My baby’s gone!’
Yes, I remember, there was a child on its pram, sleeping gently with its mother gazing intently at a magazine.
‘Help, somebody!’, she yelled again.
I ran towards her direction and spotted the empty pram surrounded by two uniformed men and other beach bottoms. I stopped right in front of the wailing woman.
‘My baby. She’s gone.’
‘Sorry ma’am but we need some info here. When and how did she disappear?’, one of the uniformed men asked.
‘I was… she was standering… I mean, she was sitting in her polly and she’
‘What’s a polly?’, the other man barked out impatiently.
‘Push chair’, she said crying angrily. ‘She was sitting in her pushchair and I was right here, in a visible distance from her and when… and when the fog came, I looked up but couldn’t see nothing. Then when the fog cleared, Chloe was gone. Whatever am I gonna do?’
‘Calm down.’ , I heard myself say with confidence gathered from nowhere. She was nowhere near beautiful, average-heighted, white, middle-classed, but she had an incredible body and blue eyeballs. She looked more like a gaunt figure than an human. The skin of her hand severally tanned was sliding round my belly. I felt genuinely sorry for her.
‘Did u, er, don’t bother.’, I said
‘What?’, she uttered back, looking up into my face in total dismay.
‘I meant to say sorry’
‘Oh.’
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olowe
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Joined: 12 Dec 2007
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 4:54 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

kool

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Shaz
Murder Cutlery


Joined: 07 Dec 2007
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Location: Essex

PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:26 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Tx.
It's a book I wrote some few months back.
I'm just too lazy to type it all.
Maybe as we go on
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chiccy
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Joined: 15 Mar 2008
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:53 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

It's iight. . . . Smile

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Shaz
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Joined: 07 Dec 2007
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Location: Essex

PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:16 am Reply with quoteBack to top

whaddu mean itz iite? iite means 'wack', u knaw??

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